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Your So Sweet

amidst grass carpet bunny nibbles flowered bulb expunges nectar Tribute To Children Entry For Carol Brown's Spring Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2010 4:57:00 PM

and this is SO SWEET! congrats!!

Sue Mason

Date: 2/3/2010 9:23:00 AM

Great imagery here and yes indeed, perfect for children ... smile ... congratulations on your win in Carol's contest!!

Brian Strand

Date: 2/3/2010 7:46:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Katherine.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/3/2010 4:54:00 AM

Congratulations Katherine, on placing in Carol Brown’s “Waiting for Spring Haiku contest with these “springy-bunny” words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/2/2010 11:21:00 PM

How very creative a Haiku this is! Congrats on your win in Carol's contest. Well deserved. Best wishes, Caroline.

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/2/2010 8:26:00 PM

Delightful haiku, those furry little creatures, you've got to love them...Margaret

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/2/2010 5:59:00 PM

delightful entry!! Congratulations on your 2nd place win!!!

Date: 2/2/2010 5:47:00 PM

You have me smiling with this fun poem. The second line snared me. Congratulations on your first place finish in Carol's contest. Way to go!! Enjoy your big honor. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/2/2010 4:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your first-place win in Carol's contest, Katherine! Great image in this haiku. Love, Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/1/2010 11:11:00 AM

A wonderful addition to that contest, as it embodies spring with its imagery. Perfect form and just a lovely write! Michael

Susan Palli

Date: 2/1/2010 8:22:00 AM

cute scene