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Your So Sweet

amidst grass carpet
bunny nibbles flowered bulb
expunges nectar





Tribute To Children


Entry For 
Carol Brown's Spring Contest

adventureanimalsdedicationchildrenimaginationhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2010 at 4:57 PM

and this is SO SWEET! congrats!!

Sue Mason

February 3, 2010 at 9:23 AM

Great imagery here and yes indeed, perfect for children ... smile ... congratulations on your win in Carol's contest!!

Brian Strand

February 3, 2010 at 7:46 AM

Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Katherine.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 3, 2010 at 4:54 AM

Congratulations Katherine, on placing in Carol Brown’s “Waiting for Spring Haiku contest with these “springy-bunny” words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

February 2, 2010 at 11:21 PM

How very creative a Haiku this is! Congrats on your win in Carol's contest. Well deserved. Best wishes, Caroline.

Margaret Foster

February 2, 2010 at 8:26 PM

Delightful haiku, those furry little creatures, you've got to love them...Margaret

Carrie Richards

February 2, 2010 at 5:59 PM

delightful entry!! Congratulations on your 2nd place win!!!

February 2, 2010 at 5:47 PM

You have me smiling with this fun poem. The second line snared me. Congratulations on your first place finish in Carol's contest. Way to go!! Enjoy your big honor. Karen