Your Smile Is As Cute As A Baby Seal's

Your smiles frozen over,
and you stand tall above the water
like an iceberg, so tall and elegant
in your presentation.

But surface-level trickery
can’t fool or satiate
my scuba diver
curiosity.

I see through your
poorly constructed ruse.

I prep my gear,
dive deep into your ocean,
and discover that underneath
the surface-level beauty lies dormant
a bummock of cuts and bruises.

The true nature of things,
the true nature of you.

A life packed full of solutionless problems,
scribbled out like math equations
written on a chalkboard
by a genius mathematician
who can’t ever prove his theories
or get anything to work.
Nobody understands him
because he can’t even understand
the things going on
in his own head.

Now,
enough of the comparisons.
Let’s get back to the subject.

You’re chronically ill.
Your condition is worsening.

You present yourself in a positive light
while, under the surface, you're
withering.

I worry for the day
when all of your problems
become too much
for you to bear,
and you slip away  
like an avalanche
in the Arctic,
never to be 
seen again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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