Your Smile Becomes My Morning

~ A lone mist drifts in feathered shadows where footprints are soft neath a robin egg sky Hushed sentiments flow on cool morning breezes as dreams bask in the light of dawn’s shining, heaven sent beams caressing our skin The warmth of a new day embraces us, sitting quietly on the veranda, two cups shared with tender glances and sweet kisses as I drink in your beauty among blooming hibiscus and hummingbird whispers seeking the nectar of our love Morning glories yawn in watercolor brush strokes, painting the landscape in Monet swept patterns while effervescent dragonflies hover nearby I take your hand and tell you I love you and watch as your smile becomes my morning . . . your love becomes my life ~
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Date: 9/2/2019 8:42:00 PM
Amazing. Love this <3 The imagery is so beautiful and the feeling you leave us with is so very special... A definite fave for me!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind thoughts and am thrilled you liked this one so much
Date: 9/2/2019 11:50:00 AM
I just love the words you use Chris. I aspire to one day write such beauty.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 9/3/2019 3:14:00 PM
Kind of you to say Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 12:10:00 PM
Don't sell yourself short Elizabeth, you are a wonderful poet. I love your work.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:32:00 AM
This is free verse at it's best, a moment of love felt during a simple yet beautiful nature moment described with touching imagery is a moment romantically and tenderly unfolded that touches my heart. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:24:00 AM
Ahh sounds like a good morning suppers Chris! Are you going to be wishing us good night too?;) of course brought a smile to my face reading such beauty as soon as I get the chance to get on!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 11:32:00 AM
No, I don't think so. That is too much pressure for me. But I appreciate your kindness and remembering those mornings and nights. Thank you so much Brenda.
Date: 9/2/2019 9:39:00 AM
The very first two lines draw us into the whole poem which is simply beautiful ...
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so very much Probir.
Date: 9/2/2019 8:43:00 AM
This is gorgeous Chris, what was it you said about nature in my poems? I always see the most beautiful images of nature unfolding through your muse... what an amazing write to start the week :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 9:28:00 AM
Thank you my friend for always being so kind to me. I guess we are similar in that aspect. Nature is the beauty I find in each day waiting just outside the door. It is always there, it never lets me down. : )
Date: 9/2/2019 8:19:00 AM
This is so beautiful. A peaceful poem to read this morning :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I always look forward to your visits.
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