Fatima Nusairat Poet Free verse

Your Smile

Your smile ringing 
A shiny and wonderful, 
like a guitar ringing in the night!  

It's ringing 
And escalate as the echo 
of the song in my soul! 

So sing oh my companion sing 
I am for the wave of your eyes yearned!

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Robin Davis November 16, 2013 at 5:34 PM Fatima There is so much love and emotion in this poem. I can feel the longing and desire in your heart. Nicely done

Kelly Deschler November 11, 2013 at 5:21 PM A very, very nice poem, Fatima! I love the flow of your words here. Really great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem! I am so glad that you enjoyed it!

Litan Dey November 10, 2013 at 11:20 AM Congratulation....your smile win the contest!!

Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2013 at 10:49 PM nice win Fatima, xox...Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2013 at 4:22 AM Congrats on the win , FATIMA Fatima Nusairat November 9, 2013 at 5:26 PM Thank you Dr.Ram .Appreciated

Skat A November 8, 2013 at 8:55 PM Fatima, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~ Fatima Nusairat November 9, 2013 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much dear Skat_Love <3

Poet Destroyer A September 28, 2013 at 9:39 PM I love the imagery and pace in this poem Fatima, thank you for sharing the light and the tune in your heart.. xox~ Linda Fatima Nusairat October 2, 2013 at 4:56 PM And thank you for reading in depth and between the lines ..you are amazing poet and reader!<3

Arthur Vaso September 27, 2013 at 10:53 PM Loved this poem! Maybe this will explain why! :) http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=488058 Fatima Nusairat September 28, 2013 at 9:49 AM So happy that you like it.thank you :)

Destiny Jordan September 24, 2013 at 11:59 AM Very beautiful poem here, Fatima! :D Loved it! :) ~Destiny Fatima Nusairat September 24, 2013 at 5:49 PM Destiny Jordan thank you dear,I am so happy that you like it!