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Your smile ringing A shiny and wonderful, like a guitar ringing in the night! It's ringing And escalate as the echo of the song in my soul! So sing oh my companion sing I am for the wave of your eyes yearned!

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Date: 11/16/2013 5:34:00 PM
Fatima There is so much love and emotion in this poem. I can feel the longing and desire in your heart. Nicely done
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Date: 11/11/2013 5:21:00 PM
A very, very nice poem, Fatima! I love the flow of your words here. Really great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem! I am so glad that you enjoyed it!
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Date: 11/10/2013 11:20:00 AM
Congratulation....your smile win the contest!!
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:49:00 PM
nice win Fatima, xox...Linda
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Date: 11/9/2013 4:22:00 AM
Congrats on the win , FATIMA
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 11/9/2013 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Dr.Ram .Appreciated
Date: 11/8/2013 8:55:00 PM
Fatima, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Skat_Love <3
Date: 9/28/2013 9:39:00 PM
I love the imagery and pace in this poem Fatima, thank you for sharing the light and the tune in your heart.. xox~ Linda
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:56:00 PM
And thank you for reading in depth and between the lines ..you are amazing poet and reader!<3
Date: 9/27/2013 10:53:00 PM
Loved this poem! Maybe this will explain why! :) http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=488058
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:49:00 AM
So happy that you like it.thank you :)
Date: 9/24/2013 11:59:00 AM
Very beautiful poem here, Fatima! :D Loved it! :) ~Destiny
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/24/2013 5:49:00 PM
Destiny Jordan thank you dear,I am so happy that you like it!

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