Your Smile

You know what I would give
Just to see you smile
If all it took was a kiss
I would make your lips mine

I know you lie in bed
Scared of the rising sun
One time you said
"I regret everything I've done"

Not sure if it's sadness or sickness
A new lie every day
You say "It's just stress"
I know you're not okay

Let me help you stand
I can show you the truth
Let me take your hand
Walk the dark road with you

Your laugh is my treasure
Your smile is priceless
I can tell you one thing for sure
You are not alone in this
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/11/2016 9:04:00 AM
nice to see this one again, Lauren...love LINDA
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Date: 5/30/2013 8:12:00 AM
wonderful write Lauren...best wishes
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:17:00 AM
Lauren, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/24/2013 1:58:00 PM
Lauren... xool winning poem... PD
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:34:00 PM
Beautiful piece! :)
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:14:00 AM
I like this, I enjoyed the easy flow...
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:05:00 AM
- Lauren, thanks for your great poem, a comfort to know that one is not alone. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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