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Your Sister

Many a day your sister’s face doth shine, And never has her complexion dimmed; Every time I see her, your beauty doth decline. Your hair unruly like a tree untrimmed. Inspired by Shakespeare's Sonnet 18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 1:16:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Charline. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:18:00 AM
very clever and funny!
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