Your Romantic Lights It Can Not Replace

Your Romantic Lights It Can Not Replace

Full moon beaming down so brightly tonight
Your dancing light did not seem quite the same
Glorious moon, you are a lovely sight
With love interlaced in your yellow flame!

Watching you shining and sharing such gifts
Lovers feel your magnificent powers
Beautiful calming sky that so uplifts
Gazing in stuttering awe these sweet hours!

As dawn rushes up to your light erase
We feeling sadness in hearts wanting more
For while missing you and your smiling face
We ask, you travel to what distant shore?

Sun is wonderful with hot burning face
Your romantic lights it can not replace!

R.J. Lindley
June 20th, 1973
Sonnet: Perfect tens, perfect 100 words

Syllables Per Line:	
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables: 140
Total # Words:	100

Note- Edited recently to hit the 100 word count.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bocsa Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Impressive both Moon of lovers And Sun of yours last hot verse. ”Sun is wonderful with hot burning face Your romantic lights it can not replace!”
Chircop Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:29 AM
When the moon leaves your shore, guess it crosses across the sky to visit my own. Indeed the sun warms our skin, but its the moon that lights up our heart and soul within ,Awesome,!
Barney Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Very lovely!!!! :D
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 10:02 PM
I really love well written sonnets. Great write, Robert. A7
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