Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Ekphrasis

Your Quiet Adoration I Quite Understand

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Your Quiet Adoration I Quite Understand

I got a message from you today
As a hummingbird set his spirit on my bay
I lent a lured heart to his sweet tweet
“read the tune and your soul feed”..
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Pure magic music is pouring
As I started your message reading
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No silhouettes of words could I see
But of admiration and veneration, a sea
Slipped into  a deep peaceful trance
Your quiet adoration I quite understand.

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 18, 2021 at 6:45 AM A great lovely sensational response to an adoring message. Very poetic!. Whose message? Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Besma Riabi Dziri February 24, 2021 at 2:40 AM My Muse message! So sweet of you to render me such a warm visit and lovely response! Thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.

Quoth Theraven January 24, 2021 at 5:26 PM Besma, Tracing and retracing all the steps to the music in poem's adoration. -Richard Besma Riabi Dziri February 24, 2021 at 2:37 AM Blessed and grateful to be granted such an honouring and graceful presence, Quoth! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! Best regards and blessings.

David Byrne January 21, 2021 at 4:36 PM The joy of communication! Besma Riabi Dziri February 24, 2021 at 2:34 AM The honour and pleasure are mine! Thank you so much, David for your visit and kind feedback! Best regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos January 10, 2021 at 10:44 AM Besma my dear friend, a humming bird such a delicate dainty looking bird, almost ready and dressed to accept an invitation to the most refined place on earth. We have some beautiful birds in South Africa and my favorite is the Lilac Breasted Roller, the most colorful bird other than the parrots from South America. I admire the way your poems flow whatever the theme, you are such a talented poetess, who is also a dear friend. Love and hugs, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri January 17, 2021 at 10:15 AM You come from a rich continent and origins and that has enriched your soul and mind.. you set on my heart your love and lore sweet Jenny! Reading your response is already a wonderful insight into your amazing world soul sister! Thank you so much for the time and care allotted to me.. deeply grateful for such a generosity and beauty! Thank you so much for all the great words on my humble words and soul.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Eve Roper January 8, 2021 at 10:08 PM I love the line, "As a hummingbird set his spirit on my bay." a beautiful, tiny, and delicate bird. Hugs Eve Besma Riabi Dziri January 17, 2021 at 10:08 AM So much obliged to you dear Eve for sharing with me the passion of reading and writing poetry! A sensitive poetess as you are! Thank you so much for being here with your lovely words! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs. Stay safe.

Vijay Pandit January 8, 2021 at 6:11 AM Enjoyed the tone of your poem, Besma. There is beauty in its voice. Besma Riabi Dziri January 17, 2021 at 10:05 AM Beauty is your great poetry and your beautiful soul, dear Vijay! So happy to have such a wonderful feedback! Thank you so much for your generosity and support. My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar January 8, 2021 at 2:20 AM Seems magic is a subject recurrent in poetry today, like mine up to a point. Loved your beautiful verse. The hummingbird is so beautiful a bird as is his message where admiration and veneration combine in a peaceful scene. Blessings. ~~ Besma Riabi Dziri January 17, 2021 at 10:01 AM Peace and Love, the magic cure for Humanity in dry and empty time.. So generous and wonderful is your feedback on my humble poetry, Victor! Always a great pleasure to read your amazing poetry.. thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.