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Your Quiet Adoration I Quite Understand

https://pin.it/4K5yRy2 Your Quiet Adoration I Quite Understand I got a message from you today As a hummingbird set his spirit on my bay I lent a lured heart to his sweet tweet “read the tune and your soul feed”.. *** Pure magic music is pouring As I started your message reading *** No silhouettes of words could I see But of admiration and veneration, a sea Slipped into a deep peaceful trance Your quiet adoration I quite understand.

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/18/2021 6:45:00 AM

A great lovely sensational response to an adoring message. Very poetic!. Whose message? Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/24/2021 2:40:00 AM

My Muse message! So sweet of you to render me such a warm visit and lovely response! Thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/24/2021 5:26:00 PM

Besma, Tracing and retracing all the steps to the music in poem's adoration. -Richard

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/24/2021 2:37:00 AM

Blessed and grateful to be granted such an honouring and graceful presence, Quoth! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! Best regards and blessings.

David Byrne

Date: 1/21/2021 4:36:00 PM

The joy of communication!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/24/2021 2:34:00 AM

The honour and pleasure are mine! Thank you so much, David for your visit and kind feedback! Best regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/10/2021 10:44:00 AM

Besma my dear friend, a humming bird such a delicate dainty looking bird, almost ready and dressed to accept an invitation to the most refined place on earth. We have some beautiful birds in South Africa and my favorite is the Lilac Breasted Roller, the most colorful bird other than the parrots from South America. I admire the way your poems flow whatever the theme, you are such a talented poetess, who is also a dear friend. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 10:15:00 AM

You come from a rich continent and origins and that has enriched your soul and mind.. you set on my heart your love and lore sweet Jenny! Reading your response is already a wonderful insight into your amazing world soul sister! Thank you so much for the time and care allotted to me.. deeply grateful for such a generosity and beauty! Thank you so much for all the great words on my humble words and soul.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/8/2021 10:08:00 PM

I love the line, "As a hummingbird set his spirit on my bay." a beautiful, tiny, and delicate bird. Hugs Eve

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 10:08:00 AM

So much obliged to you dear Eve for sharing with me the passion of reading and writing poetry! A sensitive poetess as you are! Thank you so much for being here with your lovely words! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs. Stay safe.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/8/2021 6:11:00 AM

Enjoyed the tone of your poem, Besma. There is beauty in its voice.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 10:05:00 AM

Beauty is your great poetry and your beautiful soul, dear Vijay! So happy to have such a wonderful feedback! Thank you so much for your generosity and support. My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/8/2021 2:20:00 AM

Seems magic is a subject recurrent in poetry today, like mine up to a point. Loved your beautiful verse. The hummingbird is so beautiful a bird as is his message where admiration and veneration combine in a peaceful scene. Blessings. ~~

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 10:01:00 AM

Peace and Love, the magic cure for Humanity in dry and empty time.. So generous and wonderful is your feedback on my humble poetry, Victor! Always a great pleasure to read your amazing poetry.. thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.