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Your Pain My Pain

Chronic pain is a darkness, personally endured 
Persistently battled, for suffering's ensured 
It's constant plague preys on the mind, goading your torment 
like misery designed 
Not long ago agility was free, now  
the price is too high for a defeated body 
The inner-self suffers from deep scars too 
With pity and sorrow there,
swallowing your truth 
So a quiet despair lives deep inside, oppressing desires for a life that's denied   
No one understands unrelenting pains skill, to take a life's worth
It's essence, to kill
It's faithfully consistent, at a cruel steady pace
ruthlessly taking, once dignities place
The depression and anguish won't free you, you're sure
so you can't see recovering, to be who you were
No one perceives, or grasps the extent 
So you won't share your agony, complain or vent
For someone's wise words can't understand or feel, that comparing or blaming 
won't give power to heal
And to support a response, from them, a hard sell 
They can't fathom this feeling, your existence in hell
In 'your' mind it's a place, they'll never be
This burden, this pain, they'll never see

It's really so sad and torturous to see, someone unwilling to try, 
to be free
We all have our circle of pain to endure, to think your alone 
is ignorance or... martyr
To reach out for help or advice to improve is the only way to sanity
this life to live through

If lucky, eyes will open and like words of a poet
You'll see through deaths eyes, so realize and know it
Things are their best now, for they'll only get worse
Must figure it out, before your journey's end curse
There are others who suffer but still carry on
knowing their time left is going to be gone
Work through your battle, to win over, by then
Take mind over matter, like its something you bend
Do what you need to and get out of bed
for soon, the matter won't mind...
All your pain will be dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/18/2017 10:06:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve written it so nicely, your feelings, emotions everythings are shown beautifully in this poem and this is what poetry is about however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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