Your Pain

Your pain Why do I feel your pain still When I left of my own free will My mind is heavy with the burdens you build Yet my heart is still tender And vulnerable to your every will When you’re hurting and making bad choices Your voice still touches my every emotion How is it that I still feel your pain Even when I have nothing left to gain Yes, I love you still But be with you, I never, ever will. You had my heart from the very start And slowly our love began to part Two became one, until one was none Off in separate ways for more than 365 days So how is it that to this day Your pain still finds its way Into my life and in my heart where it stays Lay

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Date: 5/19/2023 3:28:00 AM
Its a mystery! So hard we try, the pain roots even more deeper! Nicely written. Best Wishes.
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Date: 5/17/2023 7:54:00 PM
gawd this was so on point and tender to the core of what so many of us have gone thru....as was said long ago...one voice becomes a thousand crying out the pain...your quill speaks well....take a bow
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Date: 5/11/2023 10:11:00 AM
A poignant and touching poem. Beautifully written, Lay.
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Date: 5/8/2023 11:42:00 AM
This hit so close to home for me. Thank you for your insight. I absolutely love this poem!
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Date: 5/8/2023 10:31:00 AM
Hello Walayee PoetLay Witlock -Ishawy, so nice to meet you. A couple deeply in love for many years the love grows with a strong bond. Then one day one sppuse does not feel the same any more. Yes that does hurt. Even when your still in love with him. /Darlene\
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Date: 5/4/2023 4:46:00 AM
Like you said, because you are still in love.
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Date: 5/3/2023 1:08:00 PM
A moving poem. Thank you for sharing. If it's based on personal experience, I hope that you heal and only have fond memories and feelings left. Blessings and best wishes. :-)
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Date: 11/24/2010 6:34:00 PM
Thank you all for reading and relating to this write. I'm so glad to have found Poetry Soup and all of you. I feel at home here. Lay
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Date: 11/22/2010 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Walayee for your visit to my writes and your much welcomed comments. I want to take this opportunity to welcome you here on Soup and hope your stay will be fulfilling and blessed. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:39:00 PM
What a wonderful exppresions on passion you have penned so well, Walayee
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:32:00 PM
If we really love someone, their feelings remain important to us even after a relationship has ended up in a separation, Walayee. I do believe compassionate people cannot help but feel the pain of others, especially those they love. I can relate to this deeply moving poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! It is wonderful to have another talented poet sharing work here. I hope you enjoy your time on the site and look forward to reading more of your work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:27:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you for reaching out and offering your support; I truly appreciate it. I'm so excited to begin this journey. I am looking forward to sharing and reading everyone's work. The biggest challenge I've has so far is selecting the "Form" of writing. Any recommendations on this are welcomed! Happy writing... Lay = )
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:58:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Walayee. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 8:46:00 AM
!!!! Walayee, it's as if you've entered my heart and walked the journey with me! These words say exactly what I have not been able to write on paper! An exceptional, heart-touching piece of work, well-written and could only be truth. I wish you the best, be strong and God bless always. Thanks for reading mine and the comments you left. Welcome to PS and I will visit again. Love your work already! Love, Audey
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