Your Only Way

You are in my arms but you are a million miles away. You are still kind but that is your only way. Take my heart and break it apart that is your only way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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August 31, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Hi Bahram ... Your work and your thoughts are unique. You selected a form " I do not know". In your poem by adding another line and change the syllabus a little bit could be a beautiful Quatrain, couplet or even Rubai.... You are very talented, why not a Ghazal or masnavi.
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