"your My World"

I wake and take a breath from your heart...
I inhale your love for a fresh morning start..

I grab your essence with hands held tight...
I hold you warm and safe under my light...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 3, 2010 at 10:03 AM
I like your poems and i will read more and i also want to tank you for your comment.
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September 27, 2010 at 7:59 AM
Always a pleasure to read your poetry Michael. I wish to thank you for your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Do you have a brother who's single, Michael. I'd like to meet a man who can write like you. Beautiful work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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September 26, 2010 at 1:55 PM
I bet your sweetheart loves this poem as much as I do, Michael. It's so nice to see a man express emotions freely. Very refreshing and upbeat. Diane
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September 26, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Beautiful write Mr. F you sure know how to speak the language of love in just a few lines ;) luv W
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September 26, 2010 at 7:07 AM
being in love is grand. enjoy it. well stated. thank you, chuck
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