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"your My World"

I wake and take a breath from your heart... I inhale your love for a fresh morning start.. I grab your essence with hands held tight... I hold you warm and safe under my light...

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Johneesha Weaver

Date: 10/3/2010 10:03:00 AM

I like your poems and i will read more and i also want to tank you for your comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 7:59:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your poetry Michael. I wish to thank you for your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/26/2010 2:29:00 PM

Do you have a brother who's single, Michael. I'd like to meet a man who can write like you. Beautiful work, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/26/2010 1:55:00 PM

I bet your sweetheart loves this poem as much as I do, Michael. It's so nice to see a man express emotions freely. Very refreshing and upbeat. Diane

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/26/2010 12:09:00 PM

Beautiful write Mr. F you sure know how to speak the language of love in just a few lines ;) luv W

Chuck Keys

Date: 9/26/2010 7:07:00 AM

being in love is grand. enjoy it. well stated. thank you, chuck