Your My Love.

Your the light in me that makes me shine.

Your love is so strong.

Your heart and mine beat as one.

Your breath makes me shiver.

Your my love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lebeouf Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 9:25 AM
i like this one..short and sweet.
Osaghae Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 12:50 PM
.........that's....... simple..and yet, so heavy, filled with a thousands feelings. Keep it up. i love it!
Torres Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 10:21 AM
nice so who the lucky guy =)
Guzzi Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 4:32 PM
strong words & sentiments...The Shiver..might be a stronger title. Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 3:41 PM
This type of love is a wonderful feeling, Emily. Did you see Peter C.'s tag poem challening you to write about a kiss? He wrote a lovely verse for you! Love, Carolyn
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