Your My Favorite Yellow Treat

Bananas are soft and sweet
Yellow like the sun
Like the way you make me feel
Since we have begun
Your sweetness grows more each day
Sometimes it makes my head sway
From the kindness I receive
Some days its hard to believe
That I found someone like you
With a heart so pure and true
The softness on your most lips
Excites me every time we kiss
As your gentle fingers slide
Up my arm, its hard to hide
The emotions I am feeling
Sends my temperature reeling
The yellow specks inside your eyes
Can light up the darkest skies
With the warmth and sunniness 
I can no longer resist
As I peel off each layer
Of all the greatness that makes ya
Everything you are to me
I say with sincerity 
There's no one else I desire
Your sunshine sets me on fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Hey Robin, I am in love with this lovely poem - so cleverly written! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Warmest regards.
Mehta Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 1:58 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
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June 25, 2014 at 11:45 PM
Robin,, Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 8:23 PM
This is SO cute. I love this color and you did it justice!! Gosh, why now? There was a yellow contest last month. Had you entered it maybe with a different poem?
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Great comparison between your love and the banana..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Pettit Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 11:20 PM
I have never seen a poem where someone's love is compared to bananas. This is a unique perspective that is fun to read. Just change "Your" in your title to either "You're" or "You Are".
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