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Your My Favorite Yellow Treat

Bananas are soft and sweet Yellow like the sun Like the way you make me feel Since we have begun Your sweetness grows more each day Sometimes it makes my head sway From the kindness I receive Some days its hard to believe That I found someone like you With a heart so pure and true The softness on your most lips Excites me every time we kiss As your gentle fingers slide Up my arm, its hard to hide The emotions I am feeling Sends my temperature reeling The yellow specks inside your eyes Can light up the darkest skies With the warmth and sunniness I can no longer resist As I peel off each layer Of all the greatness that makes ya Everything you are to me I say with sincerity There's no one else I desire Your sunshine sets me on fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/26/2014 8:52:00 AM
Hey Robin, I am in love with this lovely poem - so cleverly written! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/26/2014 1:58:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:45:00 PM
Robin,, Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA
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Date: 3/28/2014 8:23:00 PM
This is SO cute. I love this color and you did it justice!! Gosh, why now? There was a yellow contest last month. Had you entered it maybe with a different poem?
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Date: 3/28/2014 5:51:00 PM
Great comparison between your love and the banana..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:20:00 PM
I have never seen a poem where someone's love is compared to bananas. This is a unique perspective that is fun to read. Just change "Your" in your title to either "You're" or "You Are".
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