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how proud am I to have my downy twins take this morsel of food and learn of our history as our national emblem, John Adams chose us symbols of courage, strength and freedom though we flourished before European colonization we once faced the forces of extinction ‘twas man who lent a hand taking eggs from Florida nests transporting them to other states rebounding, now we stand strong as Adams wished offering hope for our struggling nation’s resilience you will leave this nest, dear hatchlings, charged with the duty of freedom’s defender show mankind the path to love ensure no soul is left to doubt powers of a Creator and His pure goals unconditional affection and acceptance soar majestically through skies, instilling trust lead the way to Agape
*Entry for John Freeman’s “Pure Thoughts on Nature” contest

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Date: 8/4/2011 7:45:00 PM
Carolyn, lovely verse honoring the eagle. Congrats on your first place win. Love, Glenna
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Date: 8/4/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!! Wonderful poem.---Lori
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:07:00 PM
Carolyn, Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:39:00 PM
congratulations on your win! full of history and sentiment :)
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:49:00 AM
Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:17:00 AM
Congrats on your top win..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 3:40:00 AM
stirring and profound.....a very deserving win for your poem dear Carolyn....a history lesson too...I knew almost zero about Adams or these birds........wow, school on the Soup !.....well done ...best wishes Syd
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:17:00 PM
Good entry! Congrad's on your BIG win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:44:00 PM
glowing write, carols...cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:41:00 PM
What an inspirational poem, Carolyn. Well done, and well deserving the win!!
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:13:00 PM
An inspired piece here Carolyn, i wish you all the best in the contest with this..
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Date: 7/29/2011 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful piece, my friend. A surefire winner.
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:39:00 AM
Another beautiful gem Carolyn.. I really enjoyed the theme you used for the contest.. Wishing you the best ;) enjoy the weekend :) liefde Wilma
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Date: 7/28/2011 8:59:00 PM
I appreciate very much your approach to the theme of the picture, Carolyn
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Date: 7/28/2011 7:20:00 PM
thinking of pelicans in san diago. john
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:12:00 PM
As always dear poet, you cause the minds to linger in your poesy Carolyn ! I enjoy these writes of yours ! Have a wonderful night...much love(2u), james
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/28/2011 8:13:00 PM
If you turn the headstand photo upside down, tell Noah I'm Superwoman holding up the world. LOL Glad Noah enjoyed the picture, James.
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James Peranteau
Date: 7/28/2011 6:14:00 PM
Oh, did I tell you that I showed Noah your head stand? *smiles*, he made me turn you around in the photo, lol...funny lil' buddy of mine ! *winkers*
Date: 7/28/2011 3:12:00 PM
A sweet beautiful song you have here, Carolyn! One of the Winners' List, I am sure. We pray that men of "faith", foresight and genuine love will rise up in our nation always! My very best wishes for John's Contest. Much love, Annalise
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Date: 7/28/2011 1:52:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Those Eagles are beautiful from what I have seen on tv and in pictures..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Yes, most of the time my work is speaking of something deeper..Sara
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