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Your Mind Is An Oyster

life is a pearl

                                                 awe

                                           shucks shells

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/13/2019 9:32:00 PM

too hard to swallow kissing i bit her necklace the pearl is down here Thank you for a spark; to a flame, to who cares what name. Simply wonderful Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/14/2019 7:53:00 AM

Gracias mi amigo! xomo

Sand Blown

Date: 12/11/2018 9:17:00 AM

oh yes...the shell is just a chemical soup battery and the mind...a dream

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/12/2018 7:44:00 AM

Ooh that's good. x

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/6/2018 8:56:00 PM

Ha! Such wisdom in eight syllables - love it! (Though I think my mind is a jellyfish). Hugs ... - G

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/12/2018 7:49:00 AM

Brilliant, colourful, complex, squishy and I can see through, may be true! ;) thank you! <3

Mike Hauser

Date: 12/4/2018 4:27:00 PM

Lol! Nice!

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/3/2018 11:48:00 AM

"no shuckie, no chancie" good one Maureen...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2018 7:58:00 AM

Lol ;) Thank you Charlie, xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/2/2018 8:17:00 PM

Maureen, enjoyed reading this this wonderful well written beauty. If I could find a pearl in every shell

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/3/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Eve :) if! xomo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/2/2018 7:38:00 PM

and as a public service announcement, it has been said that Oysters are an aphrodisiac, and I just wanted to say this is completely untrue, the other night I ate 30 of them and only 18 worked!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/3/2018 8:46:00 AM

Tim Smith
Date: 12/2/2018 8:32:00 PM

That's because you used Canadian dolls

Tim Smith

Date: 12/2/2018 6:08:00 PM

Haha great

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/3/2018 8:44:00 AM

;) xomo!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/2/2018 1:56:00 PM

what a fun read, mau...from shuck to suck; ohh life!... thumbs up..huggs

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/3/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thanks Nette :)) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/2/2018 9:52:00 AM

Or: shells shuck life producing pearls that cause awe! Haha Excellent dearest, Maureen! xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2018 12:53:00 PM

Yesss ;) thank you dear! xomo <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/2/2018 3:10:00 AM

I just died! LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 12/2/2018 6:08:00 PM

Can I have your rum?

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2018 12:51:00 PM

How's the view?

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2018 11:04:00 PM

Aw shucks, Maureen. You do come up with the cleverest, deepest three-liners ever seen! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2018 12:49:00 PM

And yet speechless here ;) thank you so much my friend, hugs Wolf Man <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/1/2018 7:40:00 PM

You always seem to manage a superb twist even in short forms Mo. Fantastic! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2018 12:45:00 PM

Word wrench, tool of my trade ;) thank you so much Connie! xomo!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/1/2018 7:39:00 PM

Another little treasure from your skillful pen, bless your heart Maureen. Please leave a few comments come Sunday to your fellow soupers. Hopefully we can generate good feelings and new friendships together through gratitude & awareness .

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2018 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Lovely, will do! xomo :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/1/2018 5:26:00 AM

Love it!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Tania! :) xomo

Sand Blown

Date: 11/30/2018 7:03:00 PM

maureen...fraum vhere daus yor insp- iration sPring...very vell done my dear mmmhahahaaa (cofcofcof...)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:38:00 AM

If only I knew ;) Thank You! xomo

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/30/2018 6:13:00 PM

Awe, shucks! hahaha ;D I love your clever word-play...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:14:00 AM

Tee hee ;p Thank You! xomo

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/30/2018 4:47:00 PM

wow, love the paua, (power).

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:13:00 AM

Giggles n' hugs! xomo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2018 2:23:00 PM

Well, open up the oyster and see what is in there. It could be like in the movie "Sling Blade" where the man says I don't think you are like most people think you are I believe you are really deep and quiet. Then he says, " What were you thinking a minute ago?". Sling Blades replies, "Oh, I was thinking if you have any more of that potted meat down at the dollar store that I could get?". So some might be deep and others a walking blank. Sara

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:12:00 AM

Lol! Not all pearls are created equally ;) Love your insight Sara, xomo!