Your Melody

You whispered me a love song with the sweetest melody perhaps you should have sung instead a song of tragedy The words you uttered reached my soul and struck an inner chord but now I'm haunted by your tune each note a piercing sword An unrequited lovers song that taunts me night and day I long to have my soul at rest your ghost I try to lay Your shadow seems to follow it just wont let me be you seem to live inside my head of you I can't be free Perhaps deep down I can't let go afraid you'll disappear for then I will be all alone your melody no longer hear But I need for someone else to come and take the place of you to sing to me a different song with words that are brand new.
Sat 9th April 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/22/2011 1:44:00 AM
another favourite for me, loved reading your poetry, thank you
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Date: 7/2/2011 10:09:00 AM
I really love your style and passion. So much inner-emotions in all of your writes! This is definitely why I had you as a guest at my table in my poem "A Poetry Convention".
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:32:00 AM
a lovely song, too soon gone. You tell it so well.
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:34:00 AM
how did i miss this and not comment on this poem:) 7up once again
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Date: 4/9/2011 7:29:00 AM
Heartfelt write my dear poet friend... and you shall here new words and new melody..
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