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Your Love Poem

My pen was dry and my paper was full.. I promised you a love poem that would not be dull.. So I will lay you down and kiss you with lines.. I will whisper sweet words on your neck and take my time.. The kisses will rhyme and our hearts will beat in tune.. The format will be warm and structure will heat up soon.. We will glide through poetry as only two poets can.. Slipping and sliding to new words as the ink ran.. After the editing is done and the proof reading complete.. I have written you a love poem without leaving my feet..

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Summer Uchacz

Date: 9/30/2011 6:52:00 PM

AWE!!!! cutest poem every written, i truly love it. You have great talent. Keep writing :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/24/2011 1:29:00 AM

Wow, this is so sweet and seemed real. Greatly written. Hugs, Dinda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2011 2:51:00 PM

missing u Michael.. xoxo .. hope u are not working too hard luv.. big game this weekend.. ready? J.G. in football mode..always with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 11:50:00 AM

moving in bits and piece as so much to move.. and the weather is not very cooperative with a shower here and a sprinkle there today... so slow go and tedious on the temper..oh... my sons all work weekends and are taking turns helping out.. but eventually we will get there... your great poetry has calmed my nerves this Sunday.. Michael luv.. words that touch the soul so deeply.. your J.G. smiling at the toll comment.. our bridge tolls all rose too.. must be a Jersey New York thing..oh xoxoxoxo..

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/18/2011 1:01:00 AM

How romantic! Well done. What a nice way to pay tribute to someone, love it . Lee

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/17/2011 7:37:00 PM

Romantic and sweet with just enoough passion to light the heat!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2011 10:39:00 PM

VERY creative in your style here,Michael and that's what poetry is all about. Saying something in a new or different way. Great love poem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2011 7:28:00 PM

a romantic journey with poetic lines of deep passion and luv ..with artistic taste Michael luv.. fantastic premise of lovers and poetry co-mingling .. as only u can create .. your J.G. is entranced and enchanted by this piece..xoxo..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2011 7:26:00 PM

Wonderfully creative..Enjoyed your romantic touch..Thanks for stopping by...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara