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Your Love Echoes In Time

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I once had your love which sailed on the shores of sorrows, Broken hearts did shove the tears thru echoes of morrows… For it is only time, that I have to find you on Cupids arrows, It would be a crime if our love escaped the nefarious narrows; Guardians of time, give me entrance so I may find my love again, For I shall climb the portals of passion to stop the ravaged rain… My love is lost amidst chambers of time and obtuse Oblivions, In a frigid frost I circle and navigate thru loves morbid meridians; Where calamitous clocks hold back the hemispheres of devotion, And providence blocks the wheels of love and eternal emotion… Father time of infinity bring me back to the day that we first met, Restore our affinity of ambient amour before the Time Lords forget. June.09.2020 Time Poetry Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 6/12/2020 11:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win Wingster..
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Date: 6/12/2020 6:23:00 AM
The longing for love expressed beautifully through intricate alliteration and emotions Wingster. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/11/2020 6:53:00 PM
Great job on this time poem, Wings. Always enjoy your intriguing rhymes and alliteration. Congrats on your win ~ Johnny Watts
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Date: 6/11/2020 6:53:00 PM
Loved the GIF, too!
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Date: 6/11/2020 6:16:00 PM
Congrats on a top win WW, I knew it!
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Date: 6/9/2020 8:30:00 PM
So beautiful and heartbreaking, WW! I must keep this in my faves...hugs, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/10/2020 6:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Rhonda...and especially for the fav my friend...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/9/2020 9:25:00 AM
This is great work WW, loved this I have to fave this one, I really relate, great write! This one I see in the winners circle!
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Date: 6/10/2020 6:07:00 AM
Thank you kindly John...and for the fav my friend...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/9/2020 6:38:00 AM
The hands of time never turn back, Very nicely penned WW
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Date: 6/9/2020 1:57:00 AM
This poem has such a haunting beauty WW. A beautiful sadness! This is exquisite! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/9/2020 1:31:00 AM
A lovely piece written it seems in great sorrow for a love lost through some mistake in time. Perhaps a mistake that wounded the loved one. Now the writer wishes to turn back time to find a way to undo the past and start fresh or perhaps find a way to move forward and let the past stay buried in time. A beautiful and touching piece. God Bless, JB
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