Victoria Georgieva Poet Light Verse

Your Love

Listen my dear, 
Let me make you a pie,
You might get real surprised,
But I don't know, how good am I?
I'll put what it needs
And I'll make it with love,
So it won't turn to something
You'd wanna get rid of.
Even if you don't like it
You will say it is fine
Because my dear, it is mine.
This is how much I know you
And this is your love- one of a kind.

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Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2016 at 10:30 AM A sweet tender poem, enjoyed the metaphor. Linda

Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 11:33 PM Congratulations on your win Victoria Victoria Georgieva December 9, 2014 at 5:14 AM Thank you, Brenda:)

Richard Lamoureux December 8, 2014 at 12:41 PM Congratulations on a fine win. Victoria Georgieva December 8, 2014 at 5:16 PM Thank you!

Jan Allison December 8, 2014 at 11:32 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan x Victoria Georgieva December 8, 2014 at 11:35 AM Thank you. Hugs xx

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 8, 2014 at 10:41 AM Victoria, loved the simplicity and honest of this sweet poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win. Sheri Fresonke Harper December 8, 2014 at 12:05 PM Click on Contest Winners: Member to see the results, you placed well. Victoria Georgieva December 8, 2014 at 11:14 AM Thank you so much. Did i win the contest?: O

Dorian Petersen Potter November 2, 2014 at 3:16 PM Very nice poem, Victoria! It made me smile. ;) take care! xxxx D.

Jan Allison November 2, 2014 at 11:19 AM I like your unique take on the theme - think everyone would love to have a slice of YOUR pie:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman November 2, 2014 at 10:08 AM Victoria, A most wonderful and quite beautiful poem here. The metaphor of the pie representing love is quite novel. Keep up the fine writing. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid November 2, 2014 at 9:03 AM very sweet beautifully painted piece excellent pen Victoria Georgieva November 2, 2014 at 9:34 AM Thank you, I appreciate your opinion.