Your Love

Listen my dear, 
Let me make you a pie,
You might get real surprised,
But I don't know, how good am I?
I'll put what it needs
And I'll make it with love,
So it won't turn to something
You'd wanna get rid of.
Even if you don't like it
You will say it is fine
Because my dear, it is mine.
This is how much I know you
And this is your love- one of a kind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/26/2016 10:30:00 AM
A sweet tender poem, enjoyed the metaphor. Linda
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Victoria
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 12/9/2014 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda:)
Date: 12/8/2014 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 12/8/2014 5:16:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/8/2014 11:32:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan x
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 12/8/2014 11:35:00 AM
Thank you. Hugs xx
Date: 12/8/2014 10:41:00 AM
Victoria, loved the simplicity and honest of this sweet poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 12/8/2014 12:05:00 PM
Click on Contest Winners: Member to see the results, you placed well.
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 12/8/2014 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so much. Did i win the contest?: O
Date: 11/2/2014 3:16:00 PM
Very nice poem, Victoria! It made me smile. ;) take care! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/2/2014 11:19:00 AM
I like your unique take on the theme - think everyone would love to have a slice of YOUR pie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 10:08:00 AM
Victoria, A most wonderful and quite beautiful poem here. The metaphor of the pie representing love is quite novel. Keep up the fine writing. Best Wishes Always, Gary
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Date: 11/2/2014 9:03:00 AM
very sweet beautifully painted piece excellent pen
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/2/2014 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate your opinion.
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