Don El Yudo Poet Sonnet

Your Love

Your love is like an invisible magnet
Attracting me
To a warm and tender devotion
Your affection flows
Like the mellifluous song of the Chaffinch

We are now like one
Sticking by the love magnet
Producing our love in every aspect
Like the dove
You come under during the time
We flow together like the waters of the ocean
Rocking each other like the boat
Rocked on the waves of the high sea

Your love is the best of all creation
Unpolluted and sparkling
Like the lucid light of the diamond
You are just the best.

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Skat A January 12, 2016 at 12:09 PM Don, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS * SKAT * .

Tanya Edwards June 15, 2011 at 3:36 PM oh Don, you love sick pupp you !I love the feeling that you're trying to get across! I hope she's worth it!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2011 at 7:09 AM Thank you for sharing your poetry Don. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. Wishing you joy and sunshine in your life that you might find inspiration to carry on with your writing. Love, Carol