Your Love

So much passion,
so much fire,
you're like a drug;
with you,
I can't get any higher.
Loving me all over,
I can't even breathe.
I used to be sober,
but you took that from me.
You make me warm 
from my head to my feet.
You're an angel 
sent from heaven,
I'm lost in your
perfect heat.
You radiate my body
with that smile
and those perfect eyes.
You sedate my every muscle,
when your hands
touch my thighs.
Kissing you
blocks my reality.
I'm enraptured 
by your touch.
Stuck in my head
you're the melody
of a song they
could never play too much.
I hope I never loose you,
not now or ever again.
I couldn't live without you,
you are the sweetest sin.
You make the stars 
shine brighter every night,
and every day,
the sky changes its shade of blue.
Being with you
everything feels right,
there's no wrong in
anything we do.
Skin touching skin
sparks fly and ignite.
Again and again,
we write our song
through the night.
This is how your feels with
just a few words to describe it.
When our lips meet,
I get chills.
you're perfect,
so never deny it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/23/2010 10:14:00 AM
Interesting comparisons to passion in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:14:00 AM
"The color or Poetry" is one of my Fav I wrote, glad you enjoyed...I love your name "Serenity" You may see me on facebook...3 pics of me ...Jimmy Anderson..See ya!
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:45:00 AM
I couldnt have written this more perfect, you captured my breath in this, and captured what i feel with my nicholas...god i love him sooo much. <3
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:35:00 AM
Nice one. "You are the sweetest sin." Love that. This whole poem is great!
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