Your Love

Your eternal love
is the  greatest gift
that God gave me.

A selfless love
that embraces me whole;
Not for what I am
Not for who I am~
But just the way I am
when I am with you. 

You shaped me~
not the way you want me to be
but the way I should be
safe in your eyes,
safe in your arms.


16 June 2021

Dedicated to my loving husband on our 23rd Wedding Anniversary

A Brian Strand July 8 Poetry Contest
1st  place

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Date: 8/16/2021 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations! A wonderful tribute to 23 years married! Lovely in every way!
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Date: 8/2/2021 12:05:00 AM
such a beautiful poem; I enjoyed
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Date: 7/9/2021 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Lovely write. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/23/2021 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful dedication. Congratulations on your anniversary!
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Date: 6/22/2021 7:09:00 PM
Sweet and secure! Lovely, JCB. :) gw
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Date: 6/21/2021 3:32:00 PM
Agree with my friend Andrea, congrats!
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Date: 6/18/2021 9:23:00 AM
Just beautiful. Happy Anniversary. We will be number 46 coming up this August!
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Date: 6/19/2021 8:39:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea…Happy 46th Wedding Anniversary in advance!!
Date: 6/17/2021 11:34:00 AM
Happy anniversary. What a wonderful tribute to your hubby!
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Date: 6/17/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Rama.Best wishes!
Date: 6/16/2021 4:22:00 PM
Happy Anniversary! The poem is beautiful… Belle
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JCB Brul
Date: 6/16/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Belle! Appreciated!
Date: 6/16/2021 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your wedding anniversary. Enjoy a wonderful life together. This poem is such an excellent tribute to a beautiful relationship. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 6/16/2021 3:20:00 PM
Thank you my friend.TC.
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