Your Love

Your eternal love
is the  greatest gift
that God gave me.

A selfless love
that embraces me whole;
Not for what I am
Not for who I am~
But just the way I am
when I am with you. 

You shaped me~
not the way you want me to be
but the way I should be
safe in your eyes,
safe in your arms.


16 June 2021

Dedicated to my loving husband on our 23rd Wedding Anniversary

A Brian Strand July 8 Poetry Contest
1st  place
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Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations! A wonderful tribute to 23 years married! Lovely in every way!
Bangalee Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 12:05 AM
such a beautiful poem; I enjoyed
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Lovely write. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
Alex Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 11:56 PM
Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!
Ligon Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Beautiful dedication. Congratulations on your anniversary!
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:09 PM
Sweet and secure! Lovely, JCB. :) gw
Goff Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Agree with my friend Andrea, congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Just beautiful. Happy Anniversary. We will be number 46 coming up this August!
Brul Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Thank you dear Andrea…Happy 46th Wedding Anniversary in advance!!
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Happy anniversary. What a wonderful tribute to your hubby!
Brul Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Rama.Best wishes!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Happy Anniversary! The poem is beautiful… Belle
Brul Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Belle! Appreciated!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your wedding anniversary. Enjoy a wonderful life together. This poem is such an excellent tribute to a beautiful relationship. Love ~ Mala
Brul Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Thank you my friend.TC.
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