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I am terrified and this is love
Resignation; this is love
Yours is fiercer than mine, less green
Pale, flowing as a riverbed and more of it
Yours is funny in the basest way
My body curls around the edges as you talk
Away from your mouth
Backed my nose into a wall
Crushing myself to let you love me
And feel no shame in it
Is that a service to the both of us
Will our children not be grateful 
That I slowly grow away
The more my fingers bite cuts into my palm
I soothe you with my lips 
And whilst air blows through
Your clouds of smoke
Me and my riverbed behind the house
Hidden by the trees you paid for
Sink deeper than we’re ever out to do
Is it you that I cannot let die
Or your child-self in the cellar
Locked away with the dust and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/12/2024 6:53:00 PM
I really like this one
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Date: 2/12/2024 5:24:00 PM
I love this! it is inspiring and with that eerie ending it just puts it all together.
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Date: 2/12/2024 11:45:00 AM
Dear Isla , Your poem moved me deeply. It speaks of a complex love, raw and unfiltered. Your words capture the struggle, surrender, fear, and acceptance of loving someone fiercely. Your imagery is hauntingly beautiful, vividly depicting vulnerability and longing. Thank you for sharing this piece of your soul. Love it! - Blessings, Daniel.
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Date: 12/19/2023 5:49:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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