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Your Just Threre All the Time

as i walk across the room, i can't but help to notice you, the things i say the things i do, i can not say it can't be true this i do i promise you. as i walk across the stage, i notice you, our eyes engage, the things you say, the things you do, i can't but help to turn all blue, this i do, i promise you as i walk into the store, i notice you though the door the things we say, the the things we do this i promise, i love you

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Date: 11/19/2009 10:32:00 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Bree. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:17:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 11/18/2009 12:16:00 PM
Well written. this too is a favoritee.
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:42:00 AM
this is really good i enjoyed reading this poem it was one of the best i have ever read keep righting you have lots of talent >>>josh
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