Your Just Threre All the Time

as i walk across the room,
i can't but help to notice you,
the things i say the things i do,
i can not say it can't be true
this i do i promise you.

as i walk across the stage,
i notice you, our eyes engage,
the things you say, the things you do,
i can't but help to turn all blue,
this i do, i promise you

as i walk into the store,
i notice you though the door
the things we say, the the things we do
this i promise, i love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Bree. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2009 at 10:17 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
Dowdy Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 12:16 PM
Well written. this too is a favoritee.
Torres Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:42 AM
this is really good i enjoyed reading this poem it was one of the best i have ever read keep righting you have lots of talent >>>josh
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