Your Inner Beauty

Your kisses and caresses, my love, 

Make me feel like hovering over reality’s 

Solid ground


But


The touch of your soul’s inner beauty, 

Is the one, that carries me to the heights of 

Bliss’ silver cloud!  




© Demetrios Trifiatis
   08 MARCH 2015


HAPPY WOMAN'S DAY!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bacha Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Hi Demetrios I was just passing by and read from your beautiful soul this poem which made me cry. I used to be like this before, but aging took it away. Terry, still a friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 3:46 PM
You look great and your heart is still caring and loving my friend, Therese! God bless you! Thank you!
Nunez Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Wonder why I haven't read this before, sire. You saw her beautiful soul through the eyes of your love. Lovely...7. Glad to see you're here, sire. :)
Yvonne Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Stunning! An ode to true beauty!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 8:32 AM
If we are wise we will make every day "Happy Women's Day!" I enjoyed this piece Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Well, my friend, Richard, I think you and I wise enough are, on this particular point! Thank you!
Manassian Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:58 AM
This is utterly superb....What a love...what an expression of love. :) I'm enthralled.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:08 AM
I am enthralled as well by your gracious comment my dearest friend, Eileen! Thank you so much !Polla filakia!
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:27 AM
So romantic my friend...that is where true love lies
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Yes, my friend, Tim! There the true love lies! thank you for your kind visit and comment!
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:16 AM
- People who have given us a bit of their inner soul and heart, will always be a part of our lives - They will always belong to our inner box of treasure, dear Demetrios - (a 7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:04 AM
How right you are, my friend, Anne-Lise, if only more people would realize that! Thank you for your lovely visit and constructive comment!
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:33 AM
A beautiful message Demetrios - the beauty inside ones heart and soul can surpass that on the outside:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:02 AM
So true, my dear, Jan! Thank you for your kind visit and beautiful comment!
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:49 AM
That is an amazing message.I always teach my little girl to focus on that beauty..The inner beauty in herself and in the other.You are so good at these Epigrams.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:01 AM
Charmaine, my dear friend, keep teaching your little one this valuable lesson for more good people are needed a better world to make! Thank you so much for your precious comment!
Sathasivam Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:20 AM
Excellent Sir. Very romantic and touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Thank you, Ravi, for visiting and commenting! It is so nice of you!
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