Your Immortal

Soul
So bold
Rise and fall
Then rise again
From soil like a bud that blooms after fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 1:44 PM
A strong poem that heralds immortality rising from the earth's fertility. Congratulations! Brian
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April 25, 2023 at 11:37 PM
Thank you for the greeting, Sir Brian! =) Cliff
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