Your Imagination My Reality

It has happened again......
   Once AGAIN.....
  OF A FURRY, IN A HURRY
  wood & stone,
   Imagination.....
one says,
        Reality.
  One knows, 
  threw the eye of two...
   complete madness...
    a time of sadness...
  tunnel vision
intwined in time,
  Can you see through my eyes?
Can you feel my soul?
Can you see my spirit as it runs,
 as eye(I) tiptoe......
       " She is at peace,
       for she fears no evil,
      as she (I) walks through 
     the valley of death(pain)....
    You must see to understand."
"THE WAGES OF SIN IS DEATH"
  As I walk through the valley of death,
forgiveness is poured into my spirit...
 MY PHYSICAL EYES SEE.....
         time tell        Imagination....Reality
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 18, 2016 at 10:14 AM
MELISSA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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December 1, 2010 at 3:40 AM
I enjoyed the read
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November 29, 2010 at 3:35 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Melissa. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 28, 2010 at 3:41 AM
A very intense piece. The most important question, to me, in this: "Can you see through my eyes?"
A   Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 10:12 AM
lovely write,, enjoy your black friday lol,, this is a hectic day for shoppers and workers,, enjoy your weekend..p.d.
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November 25, 2010 at 9:42 PM
The meaning of this piece eludes me. Think i will need an interpretation to understand it better. i find the form of this piece interesting, and i wonder what was your reasoning for writing it this way.
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November 25, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and fantastic.. check out the contests.. good luck with luv and H.T. Day to u..
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