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Your Humble Servant

To me you are a sacred dream Each warmest hope upon the day. A glass of wish from precious stream Bright trace of sun through clouds of grey. My endless trust in times of need Our secrets shared we do confide In passions breath to one I’m freed Past darkest hour you are my guide. Protection is my granted gift To strive for you my sole delight No one event shall birth a rift Forever yours my quest to fight. Perfections promise I shall chase it's luck you chose my life to grace. 23rd May 2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2016 9:13:00 AM

- A beautiful choice of your poems, congratulations Mark - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Woods
Date: 8/1/2016 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise. This poem mean a bit to me, so that's why I chose it. : )

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/30/2016 10:39:00 PM

Excellent sonnet Mark, congratulations...

Mark Woods
Date: 8/1/2016 5:28:00 AM

Cheers Charlie

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/30/2016 7:31:00 PM

Another beautiful and meaningful Sonnet, Mark. Congratulations on your First Place win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Sandra

Mark Woods
Date: 8/1/2016 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Sandra. It's a poem that fell out right. Hopefully I can do it again.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2016 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations on you win, Mark ! Hugs Eve

Mark Woods
Date: 8/1/2016 5:22:00 AM

Crikey. Thank you Eve! Made my day : )

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/18/2016 5:44:00 AM

VERY FINE SONNET.... "To me you are a sacred dream" AND YOU CARRIED FORTH SPLENDIDLY FROM THERE!

Mark Woods
Date: 6/18/2016 1:48:00 PM

Cheers Robert, I was quite chuffed with that opening line! Not sure how you stumbled on it but thanks for the read and urge comment. : )

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/23/2016 8:12:00 AM

Oh what a lovely sonnet! This is just beautiful, Mark, this is going into my faves.

Mark Woods
Date: 5/23/2016 12:40:00 PM

Love isn't one of my stronger points when writing (this is only the second Love poem I have ever written). I'm flattered with the fave as I have a lot of development to do with this type of writing. Thank you : )