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Your Hue I Know

So very vivid and vibrant Hues of all shades marvellous, dramatic I see each golden leaf As slowly it whispers past so gently Gorgeous sunbeams peeping serenely

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Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 10/13/2008 3:08:00 AM

Nice imagination!

Deneen White

Date: 10/11/2008 5:50:00 PM

this poem speaks to my sense of colors, great write and lots of imagery, thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/11/2008 5:22:00 PM

Wow!!! Excellent write, Fathima. Apart from the syllable count that Rhoda has affectionately pointed out, it is an awe inspiring poem. To my mind it is a devotional poem. Thanks for your appreciable comments on my poem Wink of Eyes. Mohammad

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/11/2008 5:16:00 PM

I like your touch of alliteration in the first line. It really sets the stage for the poem. The autumn season is certainly brightens this poem. Your words are very descriptive and bring out the imagery. I really like the gorgeous sunbeam wording in the last line. Great job! ~Joseph