your hidden light - MONORHYME

In the quiet of the crowd, you caught my eye,
a delicate silhouette against the night sky.
Your amber gaze was weary, deep, and dry,
bearing heavy truths you'd always deny.
Your paper skin was creased; folded pages where shadows lie.
I felt a sudden grief, and began to cry,
to see your hidden pain, no words could buy.
You offered up a smile, gentle and shy,
and it changed the landscape like a sunrise nigh -
lifting up the dark, without a sigh.
For brokenness is not the end, say I - 
with the deepest grief, the gold will lie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 11:00 PM
merciful and sweet
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 1:00 AM
Well penned monorhyme. If this is for a contest you should read what the sponsor requires.
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