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Your Haven

Outside your haven 
Are worries and sadness,
The fears and tears are
Growing and coming so close,
I feel i am in a war front.

Outside your haven
Are desolation and tribulations,
Being so heavy and pressing me strongly,
Treacherous happenings all over the air,
The warmth you gave me,
Vanished as i stepped out of
Your haven.

Outside your haven
Are arrows and sorrows,
Looking so wicked and never 
Want to be friendly.

The favor i used to savor,
Can't be gotten outside
Your heaven,
But inside your haven are 
Founded peace and serenity 
Which i call my rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/12/2011 4:38:00 PM
wow Charles...this is Absolutely Beautiful..luv..another favorite of mine...such beautiful words beautifully written...love...Chiquita B. (ydmi)
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Date: 11/2/2010 9:00:00 AM
Wonderful words Charles depicting the comfort of one soul to another.. enjoyed your creativity today but try to name your poem with a form..this would be Free Verse in the chart of forms... it looks better when posting a poem if it shows the poets has designated a chosen form for the material ..of his pen.. good one my friend.. keep posting luv..
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