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Your old sleek black hair-pin is still with me, mother, I've treasured it greater than a yellow sapphire; It collects in me, memories of plaits and knot, And the roses I'd graced with dedication lot... 1 July 2021

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Date: 8/16/2021 10:24:00 AM
Beautifully written!
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Date: 8/12/2021 10:29:00 AM
Congrats on your first placement.Wow! What a precious treasure..Really, unparalleled.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/12/2021 7:25:00 AM
An heart touching write. Congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/10/2021 4:28:00 AM
Hi Christuraj, I love this poem because I am very sentimental, too. Have some of my mother's combs that are "treasured greater than a yellow sapphire." - Best Regards, Gail
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 7:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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