Your Guardian Angel

Walk this road with me by your side; never will I lead you astray. Yes, it’s I who whispers to you, sometimes nudging you to change course. When you're headed in the wrong direction, I strive to offer input: “What if you put your life in God’s hands and let Him choose the path you take." I’m here in the afterlife, waiting to escort you through Heaven’s gate. Sometimes I feel like I’m talking to myself, so silently I attempt to guide you. When you were born, I was charged with your fate. Help me succeed, just as I strive to assist you. You may think of me as your conscience, your mentor, but I know Who sent me to make life’s journey with you. Sometimes you make my task difficult, yet just like you, I am no quitter. Try if you must to put me on the shelf when temptation is overpowering. You will fail in this effort; I won’t let you turn away from me. I’m the shadow you cannot see, your guardian angel, holding eternal life’s key.
* Written for Paula’s “Who Am I” contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Carolyn This is so wonderfully written and thought out. Everyone should have an "angel" watching over them in bad, troubling, painful, doubtful and even good days. Thank you for the funny comment on my Men And Puppies poem.
Cooke Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:03 PM
i'm the shadow you cannot see, now thats poetry, a beautiful write, and my guardian angel agrees.
Ramage Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Hi Carolyn I wrote a wonderful response late evening and I could not send it, the screen kept freezing, now eloquence is lost, but it such a beautiful poem and know it really touched my heart. thank you for sharing it. Lee
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula Swanson's "Who Am I" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Ehrhardt Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Wonderful piece. I enjoyed feeling that the angel must endure along with you and will share in your victories and failures of doing our best to live a moral life. Thank you so much for reading and supporting my work.
Williams Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 6:50 AM
hey Carolyn, congrats on your win, David
Villanueva Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 10:28 AM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~really a great placement in the contest~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 4:26 PM
An absolutly wonderful write Carolyn wishes for all the luck in the contest.Thanks so much for the comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Dufresne Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:10 PM
You have got the guardian Angel down pat Carolyn. Very well done. She's probably kissing you on the cheek right now for acknowleging that angel's mission so well! Cool! (I wonder if angels high five) : ) anyway as per your comment.I Live in Okee & work on Hutchinson island in Stuart... and I bet we will get together for lunch some day. That would be awesome. You are around Datona aren't you? If we ever have to get close to each other's domain let's give each other a shout okay? -Bob
Horne Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Love this beautiful write, Carolyn. I can't think of anything for this contest.
Austin Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 12:18 PM
I believe in angels. Yours is a good description of angel duties. Mine will have her/his hands full. Love, daver
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 1:02 AM
Good one Carolyn, lurking there in your second thoughts, does ya follow or give him oughts, :) love, Don
Poet Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Love it Carolyn...very uplifting poem...best wishes.
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 5:08 PM
Beautiful write....good luck on contest....God bless..old Jack
Long Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 4:38 PM
this is wonderfully penned good luck in the contest. cory
Onclaud Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 4:32 PM
really a fine work, carols... did the same approach for paula with archangel michael as subject.. we do love angels! i am a devotee... winning streaks to you! :) huggs, nette
Babcock Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Funny I thought about you all week and wondered how you were. Have not seen your name for awhile and then came to this fabulous poem. I wrote something similar this morning on angels. Great minds think alike ha ha. No kidding this is a fantastic Carolyn. Going in my fav. love phyl
Roberts Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 3:43 PM
beautiful, best of luck in the contest Carolyn
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