Your Going Down

<                           beneath waterfall
                        let your troubles wash away ... 
                             cesspool is waiting





Entry For John Freeman's
The Precept Natures Haiku
G.L. All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Troubles can be a cesspool alright..Enjoyed reading your creative work.Congrats on your win..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 10:35 PM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, katherine!! :) huggs
Villanueva Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:17 PM
being in the same place in the contest really a thing to be proud of...CONGRATULATIONS! *-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congrats Kathereine on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on your win Katherine in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win...wonderful approach to the contest photo.
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Katherine, Great idea. Congratulations and thanks for your support. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:18 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, katherine
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