Your Forest

Your Forest You're gone, far far away Come back, that's all i want to say. I want you to miss me But i know that's impossible Still, your forest is impassable Your forest is beautiful Staying inside is so meaningful Although i know it will rain, But i can survive in the pain All these problems i can go through, if i have you So I need you.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2016 6:35:00 AM

I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2016 10:57:00 AM

simone,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Amber Bloom

Date: 5/6/2016 4:32:00 AM

Hi Simone, Beautiful debut. I loved who you used the cliche of a wall in the form of a lush forrest. keep writing!

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/5/2016 10:39:00 PM

Simone, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 10:08:00 PM

Simone, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 5/5/2016 10:00:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Simone. :)