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Your First Tee

Ever so silent wind with its calm the nature of the day is brilliant Anticipation of performance consumes your thoughts one two three and the spot light shifts The weight of everyone’s eyes seem to mushroom on your approach and the most minute sounds become ever so present. Hoping your body will remember you take your last gasp of air All you can do at this point is pray for something respectable As your eyes ascend and gaze down the fairway you exhale For this time you have escaped Ever so silent wind with its calm the nature of the day is brilliant -KR-

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:26:00 AM

thank you for the reply new poet

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2014 11:51:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kevin :) - I choose your first great written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Rocheleau
Date: 6/9/2014 9:18:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words Anne Lise! looking forward to reading your posts, I may just have a comment or two.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 9:01:00 AM

Hi Kevin, I love how this flow's out. Nature at her best... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kevin Rocheleau
Date: 6/9/2014 9:22:00 AM

Thanks for the link to the contest, not sure if I'm up to speed for that though. Looking forward to reading your poems here. Thanks for the kind words coming from the Poet Destroyer. :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/7/2014 1:59:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kevin. I bring a wish that you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.

Kevin Rocheleau
Date: 6/9/2014 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Faye, looking forward to reading your poems. Sincerely,

Skat A

Date: 6/6/2014 6:00:00 PM

Kevin,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kevin Rocheleau
Date: 6/7/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thanks for the warm welcome. I look forward to reading your posts, and learning from the poets that have been here a while.