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Tricube Challenge Poetry Contest

How Many Syllables

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Your Face, Voice, Touch

Let me see
something fine,
smiley eyes.

Let me hear
something nice,
words of love.

Let me feel
something good,
smooth caress.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Simply said nd that simplicity touches the heart!
Evans Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Thanks, Kim. You tickle my heart.
May Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 6:35 AM
This is lovely Marilene, Congrats on your win
Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:32 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Marilene. Like the use of three senses and how they tie in.
Evans Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:37 PM
Thanks for my placement and kind comments ... I left out taste and I am a foodie .... ahhh!
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