Your Face Could Launch a Thousand Ships

your eyes of a darker hue
captivate the rising sun
its red dressed cape surrounds your face
and draws me in like quicksand
in the farthest meadows hummingbirds slow flight
so they may see beauty as you quietly pass by
my eyes slowly lift to soak in each delicate glorious glow
that rests upon your skin
rendered shadows caress each curve 
bursting in technicolor
your mouth parts like a dew-soaked rose
opening its petals to the morning 
your eyes are alive
breathing life from two orchids dancing in soft light
reaching for the sun
and I,  gaze upon the face of beauty
like a trembling fawn hid in the forest


5/30/18 contest Free Verse Only...Pick a theme
Theme...your face could launch a thousand ships
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/17/2018 5:15:00 PM
'shadows caress each curve' come on already! Can you paint a more emotional picture...? Congrats!
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Date: 7/14/2018 5:30:00 PM
Wow! Frederic, your poetry enchants me with the splendor and rapture of its trembling romantic beauty. Your last two lines are especially swoon worthy.. Congratulations on your excellent win with your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/14/2018 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Really beautiful!
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Date: 7/13/2018 8:59:00 AM
More congratulations! :) xomo
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Date: 6/16/2018 10:26:00 PM
Beautiful, Frederic. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 6/9/2018 7:59:00 AM
I'm speechless. Words like sublime and eloquent come to mind but don't seem to be enough. How about a "wow", and congratulations ;) xomo!
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Date: 6/9/2018 6:37:00 AM
Each word sublime, beauty defined; congratulations on your win Frederick. Mick
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Date: 6/8/2018 6:23:00 PM
Frederic, a beautifully flowing write filled with incredible imagery, very nice.
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Frederic :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:16:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:30:00 AM
those last two line wrapped the poem up perfectly dear Frederic. I love your gift of poetry so much. You deserve greatness...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/1/2018 1:24:00 AM
frederic, how graciously enticing is this poem... i am in awe of your imagery!...huggs
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Date: 5/31/2018 8:59:00 AM
Great entry my friend...all the best for a win Frederic...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/30/2018 7:22:00 PM
Frederic, you are one smooth talker. If i had a line like this, i wouldn't be single:) I find it difficult to write these kind of poems. i guess because i don't have these feelings for anyone. This is simply stunning. It will be hard to beat!
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Date: 5/30/2018 12:03:00 PM
- This is a beautiful poem, Frederic ... a difficult title, I could not find a theme for this one :) - But you did it ... with excellence :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2018 11:52:00 AM
Wow, bursting in Technicolor and what an ending. Well done :) Good luck in the contest Frederic.
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Date: 5/30/2018 11:15:00 AM
Simply beautiful.. as always..
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