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your eyes upon me

love careening like molten honey



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:11 PM
love the imagery
Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ have a lovely day
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 7:43 AM
It's in the eyes... very nice portrayal, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lin.
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