Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

Your Eyes Only

the smooth surface of this plateau, 
one you ache to know- with risen tips
following these curves and the valley again-
increasing the echo- with whispered lips of me
repeating- for your eyes only



~ something playful ~

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Joseph May February 25, 2024 at 11:57 AM "Increase the echo with whispered lips", Wonderful write Brandy Brandy Nicole February 25, 2024 at 6:23 PM So true, an echo will be more intense with whispered lips. I'm blushing. Thank you, Joseph. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Lewis Raynes March 14, 2020 at 6:07 AM You know so much about love and sensualness, im def going to use words like lines in my future poems, hot Brandy Nicole March 14, 2020 at 1:30 PM Indeed. Sometimes, less is soooo much more. Thank you Lewis. I have read some of your playful poems and they are very exciting. :) Brandy

Simon King March 14, 2020 at 5:29 AM beautifully melodic, I read this a few times and in my minds eye saw a beautiful crystal spider gently traversing across a partly sheeted sleeping body . Weird but no offence meant your work is incredibly thought provoking Brandy Nicole March 14, 2020 at 1:28 PM The images you paint, are quite mysterious- yet playful and sensual. Your thoughts are not weird. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. I need to create something like this again. :) Brandy

Bobby May December 11, 2018 at 11:04 AM If I ever need any guidance for romance you will defiantly be the I am going to ask for help from, your heart is pure romance and love Brandy! awesome poem! Brandy Nicole December 11, 2018 at 11:15 AM Thank you Bobby. :) Such a sweet thing to say. I appreciate you and your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Nature Boy November 2, 2018 at 12:47 PM I so enjoyed the passionate and playful journey as fingertips trace upward to the firm peaks then to the valley beneath where the river flows with nature’s nectar :) Nature Boy November 2, 2018 at 2:54 PM Great point Brandy - less is more triggers the imagination to run free, whereas I tend to lead the reader down a specific path they may not be where their imagination takes them - Thank you for the guidance :) Brandy Nicole November 2, 2018 at 1:32 PM Sometimes, the imagination enjoys creating more of these playful moments. :) Saying less, says so much more. Thank you Nature Boy. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill August 27, 2018 at 3:13 PM Hello......hello......hello......TAH Brandy Nicole August 27, 2018 at 4:34 PM Okay. This must have left you speechless. :) Thank you Tobey. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith August 25, 2018 at 11:50 PM Just the right amount of desire lain beautifully before our eyes Brandy Nicole August 26, 2018 at 2:29 PM :) Thank you Tim. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2018 at 9:07 AM He is a lucky fellow. I enjoyed where this took my imagination. Brandy Nicole August 25, 2018 at 12:47 PM Thank you Richard. I enjoyed creating this playful little poem. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley August 24, 2018 at 9:12 PM Soft, silky sensuality, Brandy, with seductive whispers of hot desire.. Breathtaking! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Brandy Nicole August 24, 2018 at 9:30 PM Thank you Susan. I wanted to create something playfully sensual, yet tastefully so. Leaving some to the imagination. Your thoughts mean so much. My best to you. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf August 24, 2018 at 8:41 PM Ou, la, la... what a sensually playful write, Brandy, I must excuse myself to go take a cold shower...then I’ll come back and read it again ;) John Brandy Nicole August 24, 2018 at 9:25 PM Your thoughts make me blush, my heart flutter softly as well. :) Yes, this is playful indeed. Holding the right amount of passion. Thank you John.

Arturo Michael August 24, 2018 at 5:26 PM Sweet to the core...perfect to place on a wall... a reminder of the burning desire of love...Nice one Brandy...All the best my friend Brandy Nicole August 24, 2018 at 6:40 PM Such a wonderful thing to say Arturo. I am smiling. :) Beauty dances through this, as does passion and desire. ~ Brandy

Chris Green August 24, 2018 at 5:02 PM Definitely one that creates thoughts and smiles. :) You have such a soft touch with your words. Beautifully done Brandy. Brandy Nicole August 24, 2018 at 6:37 PM True, and it also creates a breathtaking mood. :) Thank you Chris. Your thoughts wrap softly around me. ~ Brandy