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Your Eyes Only

the smooth surface of this plateau, one you ache to know- with risen tips following these curves and the valley again- increasing the echo- with whispered lips of me repeating- for your eyes only ~ something playful ~

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Joseph May

Date: 2/25/2024 11:57:00 AM

"Increase the echo with whispered lips", Wonderful write Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/25/2024 6:23:00 PM

So true, an echo will be more intense with whispered lips. I'm blushing. Thank you, Joseph. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/14/2020 6:07:00 AM

You know so much about love and sensualness, im def going to use words like lines in my future poems, hot

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/14/2020 1:30:00 PM

Indeed. Sometimes, less is soooo much more. Thank you Lewis. I have read some of your playful poems and they are very exciting. :) Brandy

Simon King

Date: 3/14/2020 5:29:00 AM

beautifully melodic, I read this a few times and in my minds eye saw a beautiful crystal spider gently traversing across a partly sheeted sleeping body . Weird but no offence meant your work is incredibly thought provoking

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/14/2020 1:28:00 PM

The images you paint, are quite mysterious- yet playful and sensual. Your thoughts are not weird. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. I need to create something like this again. :) Brandy

Bobby May

Date: 12/11/2018 11:04:00 AM

If I ever need any guidance for romance you will defiantly be the I am going to ask for help from, your heart is pure romance and love Brandy! awesome poem!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/11/2018 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Bobby. :) Such a sweet thing to say. I appreciate you and your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Nature Boy

Date: 11/2/2018 12:47:00 PM

I so enjoyed the passionate and playful journey as fingertips trace upward to the firm peaks then to the valley beneath where the river flows with nature’s nectar :)

Nature Boy
Date: 11/2/2018 2:54:00 PM

Great point Brandy - less is more triggers the imagination to run free, whereas I tend to lead the reader down a specific path they may not be where their imagination takes them - Thank you for the guidance :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/2/2018 1:32:00 PM

Sometimes, the imagination enjoys creating more of these playful moments. :) Saying less, says so much more. Thank you Nature Boy. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/27/2018 3:13:00 PM

Hello......hello......hello......TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2018 4:34:00 PM

Okay. This must have left you speechless. :) Thank you Tobey. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 8/25/2018 11:50:00 PM

Just the right amount of desire lain beautifully before our eyes

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/26/2018 2:29:00 PM

:) Thank you Tim. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2018 9:07:00 AM

He is a lucky fellow. I enjoyed where this took my imagination.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/25/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Richard. I enjoyed creating this playful little poem. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/24/2018 9:12:00 PM

Soft, silky sensuality, Brandy, with seductive whispers of hot desire.. Breathtaking! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2018 9:30:00 PM

Thank you Susan. I wanted to create something playfully sensual, yet tastefully so. Leaving some to the imagination. Your thoughts mean so much. My best to you. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/24/2018 8:41:00 PM

Ou, la, la... what a sensually playful write, Brandy, I must excuse myself to go take a cold shower...then I’ll come back and read it again ;) John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2018 9:25:00 PM

Your thoughts make me blush, my heart flutter softly as well. :) Yes, this is playful indeed. Holding the right amount of passion. Thank you John.

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/24/2018 5:26:00 PM

Sweet to the core...perfect to place on a wall... a reminder of the burning desire of love...Nice one Brandy...All the best my friend

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2018 6:40:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say Arturo. I am smiling. :) Beauty dances through this, as does passion and desire. ~ Brandy

Chris Green

Date: 8/24/2018 5:02:00 PM

Definitely one that creates thoughts and smiles. :) You have such a soft touch with your words. Beautifully done Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/24/2018 6:37:00 PM

True, and it also creates a breathtaking mood. :) Thank you Chris. Your thoughts wrap softly around me. ~ Brandy