Your Eyes Came Talk To Me

flawless wreck
floating wrapped in lulled current

by fluid veracity you have overheard  
draft of my soul's architecture
moaning from the pellucid frame
embedded in that petty-bourgeois wall

I listened your eyes whispering through my glassed barrier

scream
yell 
treble 

something changed inside
glassed surfaces started trembling
which made me envisage
they have shape of a fish tank

I listened your eyes whispering – you don't want to be a fuc**** fish
mute and hunted

scream
yell 
treble 

glassed surfaces are trembling
thousands of translucent shrapnels
created a harmony from my outburst partiture


I'm screaming
I'm yelling
I'm trebling


you were the first one 
who really listened 
those drawn lines 
from that saturated paper


I've heard your eyes vowing – I'll rebuild you

piece by piece
we will be a home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 21, 2017 at 2:02 AM
wow, sanja, wow. This is beautiful. As I said earlier, you can write. Those last three lines are beautiful.
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September 21, 2017 at 2:13 AM
Thank you very much ... some poems really need an "extra polishing" so I welcome any comment or suggestion :)
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