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Your eyes came talk to me

flawless wreck floating wrapped in lulled current by fluid veracity you have overheard draft of my soul's architecture moaning from the pellucid frame embedded in that petty-bourgeois wall I listened your eyes whispering through my glassed barrier scream yell treble something changed inside glassed surfaces started trembling which made me envisage they have shape of a fish tank I listened your eyes whispering – you don't want to be a fuc**** fish mute and hunted scream yell treble glassed surfaces are trembling thousands of translucent shrapnels created a harmony from my outburst partiture I'm screaming I'm yelling I'm trebling you were the first one who really listened those drawn lines from that saturated paper I've heard your eyes vowing – I'll rebuild you piece by piece we will be a home

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Date: 9/21/2017 2:02:00 AM
wow, sanja, wow. This is beautiful. As I said earlier, you can write. Those last three lines are beautiful.
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 9/21/2017 2:13:00 AM
Thank you very much ... some poems really need an "extra polishing" so I wellcome any comment or suggestion :)