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Your Eyes

 (Dedicated to Folake)

Your eyes, woman
are like twilight rainbow
amorously bearing aloft passions of mine
toward androcytic ecstacy.
They tell of endless lights.

Night skies clarion the warmth of you
keep me balled-up till
i am tilted to your adorned essence.

May I call up words to adore you,
agglomerate them into a panoply of worshippers
unsandalled before you
like Moses at the burning bush.
And now you seem to fall asleep
but you tell me it's the heavy night
bidding toward a sunny dawn
wherein our love is lighted.

Slowly I let you fall asleep
impatient with the long night
waiting to gaze once more
into the eyes of my lovely love.

Then a lip is placed on yours
and you rouse up wide-eyed
smiling at my romantic move.
We enjoyed the night, cruising on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 1/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
Onis, hope to see you back this year... 2016.......skat
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Date: 6/12/2013 7:48:00 AM
@ Anne Lise Andresen, thank you so much for stopping by! I'm so glad you took the time to comment on my poem. Thank you so much, once again. @ Linda - A, your first observation about this piece is highly appreciated. Thank you so so much, Linda for your comments. I'd be glad to follow you and your poetry too! This is indeed a big family! The feeling that my poetry is given such wonderful attention is a thing of immense joy.God bless you all! Thanks SKAT
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Date: 6/11/2013 2:07:00 PM
The imagery is lovely Onis, very suave . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/11/2013 12:44:00 PM
- Hi Onis, enjoyable with new members in P-Soup - I will welcome you, and thank you for your first poem. - I hope there will be many more in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2013 8:09:00 PM
Onis, i like the dedication , an awesome approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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