Frederic Parker Poet Rhyme

Your Eyes

eyes that haunt my soul are yours
they burn my soul with fire
I bend my knee our love endures
lights our lasting flaming desire


7/26/20
contest Four Lines
sponsor Constance La France

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Constance La France July 29, 2020 at 5:22 PM Frederic, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this wonderful write and the music is amazing _Constance

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2020 at 1:40 PM Congrats on the win, Frederic. Love how you wrote to the picture!

Line Gauthier July 28, 2020 at 6:31 PM Lovely, Frederic. I particularly appreciated the accompaniment ~

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 1:29 PM What a passionate muse Frederic. Congratulations on your win!

Carolyn Devonshire July 28, 2020 at 8:41 AM Passion fills this poem, Frederic. And you chose a remarkable image to show her haunting eyes. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Jenna Logan July 28, 2020 at 4:43 AM Congratulations on the intense thoughts of your lines being honored, Frederic.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2020 at 2:56 AM - Four beautiful lines, Frederic ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands July 26, 2020 at 9:49 AM Great poem Frederic :)