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eyes that haunt my soul are yours they burn my soul with fire I bend my knee our love endures lights our lasting flaming desire 7/26/20 contest Four Lines sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 7/29/2020 5:22:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this wonderful write and the music is amazing _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 1:40:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Frederic. Love how you wrote to the picture!
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Date: 7/28/2020 6:31:00 PM
Lovely, Frederic. I particularly appreciated the accompaniment ~
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Date: 7/28/2020 1:29:00 PM
What a passionate muse Frederic. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:41:00 AM
Passion fills this poem, Frederic. And you chose a remarkable image to show her haunting eyes. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 7/28/2020 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the intense thoughts of your lines being honored, Frederic.
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Date: 7/28/2020 2:56:00 AM
- Four beautiful lines, Frederic ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:49:00 AM
Great poem Frederic :)
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