Edward Ibeh Poet Rictameter

Your Eyes

Your eyes

                           tell a story. 

             There's something inviting; 

              captivatingly mysterious 

about them, and they speak of tenderness. 

          The window to your soul, ajar.

               You radiate sunshine, and

                           I see it in 

                           your eyes


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Strand Select D, Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date:  04/05/2020

Date written: 12/28/2019

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Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2020 at 6:27 AM Congrats, Edward on your joyful write! Edward Ibeh February 6, 2020 at 5:39 PM Thank you so much, Kim:-)

Sam Kauffman February 5, 2020 at 12:19 PM Such a delicate verse, Edward. I love the line "the window to your soul, ajar." Congratulations on your top win. Edward Ibeh February 5, 2020 at 12:34 PM Thank you very much, Sam:-) I wrote it about my wife.

Hello There December 28, 2019 at 9:12 PM Lovely to know you can see or are at least willing to search for what lies inside ~ Love this. A fave for me :) Edward Ibeh December 28, 2019 at 10:04 PM Thank you for the comments and visit, HT:-) I appreciate the fav!