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Your Eyelids,My Sunshades

Give me shelter under your eyes let your eyelids be the sunshades when scorching sun is in the sky gift me a pleasant serenade. On the evening of lashing rain give me shelter under your eyes let your eyelids touch all those pain and listen to their dormant cries. When a pensive breeze leaves its sighs on the corridors of my soul give me shelter under your eyes and remind me of all my goals. Show me the path with your candle until a serene full moon's rise help me to ring the sacred bell give me shelter under your eyes. © kash poet =====================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/10/2012 8:44:00 AM
oh, where art thou?.. i need your feedback on my piece" an ancient place.."..miss ya with huggs! :)
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Date: 1/9/2012 12:06:00 AM
you fill me up, kashi.. big cheers for the great win.. came up with something today; come and and visit..:) i hugg you! :)
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:45:00 AM
Nice write,Kash.Congratulations on your win....keep flying...
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "You Pick Again" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2011 9:15:00 AM
A new way to look at loving. Such a sensitive lovely verse about a subject that never goes out of style. Beautiful Kashi!
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Date: 11/27/2011 8:41:00 AM
A beautiful flow here. Nicely written Kash
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Date: 11/27/2011 7:38:00 AM
I love it exceptionally the last stanza.. congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 11/27/2011 1:43:00 AM
'When a pensive breeze leaves its sighs on the corridors of my soul'...a beautiful flow in these poetic words. Well done Kash, this is an exceptional work...Margaret
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Date: 11/26/2011 4:15:00 PM
Kash, A wonderful Quatern and they are not that easy to write. Sorry for my limited time to respond to poems. I thank you for your comments on my poems. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:32:00 PM
Kash, first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! About this poem: very lovely... thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:13:00 PM
A very unique entry, Kash. I see you got your moving line that you were worried about. Nice imagery throughout! Now tell me, why have you not put your real picture up yet? maybe you can use the one of just your big brown eyes peering out! It's mysterious!
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Date: 11/25/2011 5:07:00 PM
* "Very Moving & Beautiful Soul Stirring Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Kash * When One Truly & Deeply Loves Another Then * Tis All That Their Hearts Do Wish In This * Their Loves Eternal Happiness * Anything Other Would Seem But The Greatest of Tragedies * Very Beautiful Painting * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/25/2011 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Kash. The pretty lady in your pic is your wife/girlfriend?
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Date: 11/25/2011 1:32:00 PM
lovely piece kash
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Date: 11/25/2011 12:43:00 PM
I love this Kash, I still giggle at the confusion you create with your avatar.. :)
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Date: 11/25/2011 10:02:00 AM
Kash, i really love the flow and rythmn of this, it tells a story that holds you until the last line, well done..David
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