Kash Poet Poet Quatern

Your Eyelids,My Sunshades

Give me shelter under your eyes
let your eyelids be the sunshades
when scorching sun is in the sky
gift me a pleasant serenade.

On the evening of lashing rain
give me shelter under your eyes
let your eyelids touch all those pain
and listen to their dormant cries.

When a pensive breeze leaves its sighs
on the corridors of my soul
give me shelter under your eyes
and remind me of all my goals.

Show me the path with your candle
until a serene full moon's rise
help me to ring the sacred bell
give me shelter under your eyes.





© kash poet
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Nette Onclaud January 10, 2012 at 8:44 AM oh, where art thou?.. i need your feedback on my piece" an ancient place.."..miss ya with huggs! :)

Nette Onclaud January 9, 2012 at 12:06 AM you fill me up, kashi.. big cheers for the great win.. came up with something today; come and and visit..:) i hugg you! :)

Olusegun Arowolo November 28, 2011 at 10:45 AM Nice write,Kash.Congratulations on your win....keep flying...

Carol Sunshine Brown November 28, 2011 at 10:25 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "You Pick Again" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley November 27, 2011 at 9:15 AM A new way to look at loving. Such a sensitive lovely verse about a subject that never goes out of style. Beautiful Kashi!

Bob Quigley November 27, 2011 at 8:41 AM A beautiful flow here. Nicely written Kash

Cory Long November 27, 2011 at 7:38 AM I love it exceptionally the last stanza.. congrats on your win. cory

Margaret Foster November 27, 2011 at 1:43 AM 'When a pensive breeze leaves its sighs on the corridors of my soul'...a beautiful flow in these poetic words. Well done Kash, this is an exceptional work...Margaret

Connie Marcum Wong November 26, 2011 at 4:15 PM Kash, A wonderful Quatern and they are not that easy to write. Sorry for my limited time to respond to poems. I thank you for your comments on my poems. Blessings, Connie

Poet Destroyer A November 25, 2011 at 11:32 PM Kash, first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! About this poem: very lovely... thank you for sharing,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich November 25, 2011 at 11:13 PM A very unique entry, Kash. I see you got your moving line that you were worried about. Nice imagery throughout! Now tell me, why have you not put your real picture up yet? maybe you can use the one of just your big brown eyes peering out! It's mysterious!

Sarah Seraphin November 25, 2011 at 5:07 PM * "Very Moving & Beautiful Soul Stirring Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Kash * When One Truly & Deeply Loves Another Then * Tis All That Their Hearts Do Wish In This * Their Loves Eternal Happiness * Anything Other Would Seem But The Greatest of Tragedies * Very Beautiful Painting * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *

Jack Horne November 25, 2011 at 2:05 PM Beautiful piece, Kash. The pretty lady in your pic is your wife/girlfriend?

Prince Ekpemandu November 25, 2011 at 1:32 PM lovely piece kash

Wilma Neels November 25, 2011 at 12:43 PM I love this Kash, I still giggle at the confusion you create with your avatar.. :)

David Williams November 25, 2011 at 10:02 AM Kash, i really love the flow and rythmn of this, it tells a story that holds you until the last line, well done..David