Your Everywhere

I thought of you just today,
when a song you loved came on to play.
I pictured you so young and strong,
you loved to laugh and sing along.
I saw you in the things I smelled,
this child of mine that I once held.
I saw you in last winters snow,
and in a campfires tender glow.
I saw you in the dunes of sand,
where you would always lend a hand.
You gave me courage to strive for more,
but for yourself...you closed the door.
I'll not forget you...this is clear,
cause you are with me there and here.
                                                             P.R. Deremer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/26/2023 4:43:00 AM
Great poem Pam! I loved reading this Keep writing :-)
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Date: 6/26/2023 12:13:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was emotive. There are many empty hours in grief. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/21/2015 1:22:00 PM
SO MUCH LOVE FOR YOUR CHILD.
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Tu Tran
Date: 7/21/2015 4:38:00 PM
He's in heaven smiling and enjoying reading all the poems that you wrote.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 7/21/2015 4:13:00 PM
Yes. We were best friends. He passed the day after his 28th birthday.
Date: 7/17/2015 3:50:00 AM
Touching.. Beautifully expressed
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