Your Eternal Flame

During the Christmas holidays a candle is continuously lit.
       It is in your memory to let you know I'll never forget.
Each year that passes gets harder than I like to admit.
       I sit by the fire reminiscing while I smoke a midnight cigarette.
Your vanilla scented candle burns on the coffee table.
       I admit when you passed I wasn't mentally stable.
You would be proud of me because eventually I pulled myself together.
       I remember you warned me so many times you wouldn't be here forever.
You were my superwoman, I believed you were tough as steel.
       This candle along with your memory helps me to heal.
It's kinda like you're right here with me.
       I think of you as I put each ornament on the Christmas tree.
Tears roll down my cheek as I whisper your sweet name.
       Inside my heart resides your eternal flame.



*I love you momma Merry Christmas Queen.....
Billie Jean Alexander Lopez...May 1, 1937 - July 26, 2007

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/18/2009 10:42:00 PM
Was very busy yet i had to drop by read your good poetry,This poem twisted and wrenched my heart out,There is nothing more sad than losing Mum,These verses touched my heart.You did it Jimmy,indeed deed..touch me..Charma
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Date: 12/17/2009 12:57:00 PM
So beautiful you brought tears to my eyes, Jimmy. The death of a parent is difficult to accept and their memory will live on in your heart forever. I do hope you find joy in this holidays this year. Surely your mother would have wanted you to be happy. God bless you, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2009 10:02:00 AM
My Jimmy, since my soup mail isn't getting to you cause of some server error, hope you get this comment. Great tribute to your dear Momma! I am sure she's at peace with you because love never dies. She watches over you. As much as possible, have a pleasant Christmas. I'll be thinking about you. You should have mail from me by now. Peace and love, Audrey*
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