Kim Van Breda Poet Dramatic Monologue

Your Essence

YOUR ESSENCE

Dazzled by your essence
a phenomenal thing-
miraculous.
Birds flock in masses
and dolphins more than
sing.

Your sun melts my
cold disposition as
the moon mends
memories.
Your cobalt lightening
streaks a charge
to help rekindle
hope.



© Kim van Breda—21 June 2014

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Justin Bordner June 25, 2014 at 8:57 PM Our lovers should be bolts of beautiful inspiration, shocking our despair into humility, invigorating our need to share love. I love the unique lightening metaphor, I saw some gorgeous bolts during yesterday's fickle storm. I admire the efficiency and clarity, and honesty of tbis poetry Kim. J.A.B.

Leon Enriquez June 23, 2014 at 5:23 PM Dear Kim: Good write. Good read. Nicely done. Leon