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Your Driving Me Crazy

with you i find myself in a state of flux from happy to sad to confused and confounded in due course an end will eventually come but now, i wait indebt, out of control under your control, lost inside my head and you with your features, promises no out right refusal, you thread me through and when i'm away from you i write poetry such as you have never seen that can never be felt by princess or queen who have never felt the depth of my being but to you i assign this power so sacred that you have my heart, mind and soul it's true what they say; i'd quit if i could. but then, how would be the love i wish for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2012 1:16:00 PM
Very interesting on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 1/18/2012 9:54:00 PM
Is this April then?
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Date: 1/14/2012 3:37:00 PM
I like this one.I am still here but not for long.I have a cliff that awaits me.I am sorry and yes you can consider me a friend.I have lost faith and need to move on.thanks for caring.It will be ok.
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:53:00 AM
Yeah, this is totally represent what I feel right now.. I'd quit if i could, really! I would! :)) thanks for your comment at on my page
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Date: 1/12/2012 12:18:00 PM
thank you for your comments on my work, sorry you don't like my poetry. So how is your book coming?? Mine is doing great and is selling like hotcakes. Best of luck on all your endeavers.
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Date: 1/12/2012 10:00:00 AM
Hmmmm Yes, love is blind but marriage is an eye opener. You never really know someone until you live with them awhile. Good Write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/12/2012 10:24:00 AM
Lol eye opener
Date: 1/11/2012 9:26:00 PM
cyclops...lol... If i tell you what drives me crazy,, your gonna call me ROUGE",,,, xox...p.d.
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:27:00 PM
Natalie, you said it! it is the female version of the staker!!!
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Date: 1/11/2012 4:33:00 PM
Wow John that almost sounds like it could be coming from someone's stalker. Very interesting monologue!
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John Loving Iii
Date: 1/11/2012 5:26:00 PM
you know? your right! and i hope everybody see's this.

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