Your Driving Me Crazy

with you i find myself in a state of flux
from happy to sad to confused and confounded
in due course an end will eventually come
but now, i wait indebt, out of control
under your control, lost inside my head
and you with your features, promises
no out right refusal, you thread me through
and when i'm away from you i write poetry
such as  you have never seen
that can never be felt by princess or queen
who have never felt the depth of my being
but to you i assign this power so sacred
that you have my heart, mind and soul
it's true what they say; i'd quit if i could.
but then, how would be the love i wish for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Babcock Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Very interesting on this poem. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Is this April then?
Bono Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 3:37 PM
I like this one.I am still here but not for long.I have a cliff that awaits me.I am sorry and yes you can consider me a friend.I have lost faith and need to move on.thanks for caring.It will be ok.
Minardi Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 9:53 AM
Yeah, this is totally represent what I feel right now.. I'd quit if i could, really! I would! :)) thanks for your comment at on my page
Cooper Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 12:18 PM
thank you for your comments on my work, sorry you don't like my poetry. So how is your book coming?? Mine is doing great and is selling like hotcakes. Best of luck on all your endeavers.
Ball Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Hmmmm Yes, love is blind but marriage is an eye opener. You never really know someone until you live with them awhile. Good Write. God Bless, JB
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January 12, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Lol eye opener
A   Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:26 PM
cyclops...lol... If i tell you what drives me crazy,, your gonna call me ROUGE",,,, xox...p.d.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 4:33 PM
Wow John that almost sounds like it could be coming from someone's stalker. Very interesting monologue!
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